Kuwaiti Chopper Dude !!: When It Hits You !!
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Nombre: The Don ®
Lugar: Sand Box, Kuwait

A true Biker that found the only escape from living in Kuwait.. taking long motorcycle rides down the highway..

sábado, octubre 28, 2006

When It Hits You !!

And so it ends.. Or did it just begin?

He looked into her eyes, and his life passed by him like a movie thinking of how he went one day without knowing her. He was laying down looking at her talk, he smiled, pretended to be listening to her, but his mind couldn’t help but to keep thinking and asking how he went on waking up everyday of his life without having her hold him close?

He looked at her and thought: "She’s a funny girl, she makes my tummy hurt from laughter"

She laid her head on his lap and asked him in modesty about the reason that makes him like her? She has no idea.. She doesn’t see the sunshine in her eyes that lights up his soul.

She never believed that she’d find someone like him, never in her entire life. She never believed in playing games, in following the dating rules, she wanted to follow her heart, follow her heart so that she can find her dream, and the final destination where she wants to live and settle with the man she loves, him. She never felt she had something that other women did not have until he told her . He told her how she is everything to him, his lover, his best friend, and his everything.

He kept looking into her eyes, and questioning him self with so many thoughts that were wandering around in his space. Today, He believes in everything that he once thought he didn’t believe in. He thought that love at first sight never existed, and there he is today falling head over heels for someone he first laid his eyes on. She shook his core, made him someone he’s always wanted to be.

Although she never expected in thousands of years that she will have such magical love with anyone, but in that person who she got to know in an unexpected way, she sees all her dreams come true. She fell in love with him at first sight, her thoughts and emotions were clinging in her throat, it was sweetly suffocating her. Her senses were numb, her surroundings were on mute, she did not feel or see or sense anything but his presence in front of her.

And there it is, life just like he wants it. The shine and glory.. The peace and love that he knew once existed, but never thought it would be found in the strangest places. The best thing is that it came to him just like he always dreamed, unexpectedly, but he never dreamed of finding such person.

She was always obsessed with the beauty of her surroundings, but she realized that this doesn’t matter when love is in the air, their love beautified the place, added a glow, and added a sense of serenity.

In that place their love was born, the love that he knew was innate in him long ago.

He kept looking into her eyes, taking a mental picture of her smile, and realizing that this is it, she’s the light in the end of his tunnel, she’s the one that he sees him selfm growing old with. And he promised that he will always and forever cherish every moment together. hitting him that he’s lucky to have found not someone like her, but to have found her in particular.

She had to leave his presence. For it was time, but she left a part of her with him. She left half of her soul, and took his half with her that day. He assures her everyday, that he’ll always be there for her, and they’ll end up together no matter how strong is the storm, how rigorous are the circumstances, she is meant for him and he is meant for her.

At the elevator she waved to him as he was looking at her admirably by the doorstep, she’ll never stop loving him, and he’ll never stop loving her.. He’ll hold her soon, and she’ll kiss him sooner, they’re just waiting, and nothing is harder than waiting..

And so it ends... Or did it.. just begin??

Comments on "When It Hits You !!"

 

Blogger Cuteberry said ... (10/28/2006 12:39 PM) : 

Ohhhhh, I think it ends, but I hope it begins..

*singing*
This could be it, I think I'm in love
It's love this time
It just seems to fit, I think I'm in love
This love is mine

I can see you with me when I'm older
All my lonely nights are finally over

Oh, when you kiss me
I know you miss me
and when you're with me
The world just goes away

 

Blogger dishevelled said ... (10/28/2006 11:42 PM) : 

That's the most beautiful thing I've read in....I can't even remember! Move over Nicholas Sparks, here comes Kuwaiti Chopper Dude. Seriously, you should write a novel, that was amazing!

 

Blogger J said ... (10/29/2006 12:12 AM) : 

Wow I remember days like those when u meet someone and u live far away and everytime you have to say goodbye u cant even look at the person cause it hurts so much to let go and u dont even know if this will be the last time or if there will be a next. U turn away so they cant see ur tears. I thought it was all over now it will happen again my heart breaks everytime i think that this pattern will start again. Constantly thinking is this the last time? It could always be the last time even when u live in the same town but when u know that its a plane ticket or four hours away and there are no work ties to that country it could easily end just as soon as it begins :(

 

Blogger Judy Abbott said ... (10/29/2006 1:23 AM) : 

bring it on dude!
You forgot one important thing, how long they have been together? or they didn't yet?

Confusion takes place when ever two hearts pump, is it forward or backward. Shall we fall in love or hold it back? do i have to say i love you ? or let time show you the love? Was it love or was it lust? is it going to last? or we should enjoy the present?

Confusion is what hits when love is undefinable.

 

Blogger Mia said ... (10/29/2006 10:29 AM) : 

As long as they love each other it will never end. Even if they are never physically together again. I see your mojo has found his way back home. WB mojo!

 

Blogger Sheba said ... (10/29/2006 6:06 PM) : 

heyy you! its been a loooooooooooooooooooooooong time, how are you?

I really hope this blog is about you!

please write me & tell me how you are.

take care :)

 

Blogger Aldara said ... (10/30/2006 1:27 AM) : 

Everything has a beginning and an end, but when? That is the question ...

 

Blogger The Don ® said ... (10/30/2006 1:16 PM) : 

Dear all.. I enjoyed your comments, but I wanted to mention something.. something that maybe I didn’t convey properly.. "And so it ends.. Or did it just begin?"

If you read the post, you’ll see that the experience had ended as she stepped out of the place. It showed that it is the end of the story, and that the encounter that is being told has nothing more to show.. it ended as the door of the house closed.. but on the other hand, it was the exact time where they realized that they are for each other no matter what.. it was the beginning of a love story that will go for ever between them.. it is the beginning of a chance to live happily ever after for the rest of their human lives.. grow old and wrinkly, and have more and more of those wonderful moments like the ones they just had.. that what I meant by "And so it ends.. Or did it just begin?"



CuteBerry, I should have ended it with this song.. :)

Disheveled, oh my goodness.. hehehe.. ok!! sweetheart, I am not novel material.. lol but thanks for the ego boost.. hehehe

J, I know what you are saying, but like you said, this story is not necessarily with two people living far away..

Nooni, I’ll try to bring it on.. :P

It was their first time after realizing that they love each other..

Mia, I made a deal with my mojo, I’ll give it days off when ever it needs it, and it promised to come back..

Sheboona, woow.. one of my fellow old school blogger.. I missed you too I swear.. I hope things are dandy with you.. and like always, I never say if what I write had come to me from an inspired moment, or I was through the experience my self.. but to think about it, it seems too perfect to happen no? :P

Aldara.. true.. but let us try and stay away of thinking of the end, and enjoy the beginning and what it brings in our life.. :)

 

Blogger J said ... (10/30/2006 11:38 PM) : 

I was talking about myself :( Each day is a closer step to the end.

 

Blogger Sheba said ... (10/30/2006 11:57 PM) : 

no, laish too perfect?

 

Blogger mallak said ... (10/31/2006 3:14 AM) : 

I was thinking the same as Mia, wow you found your mojo!

I've missed you writing like this. It was truly beautiful. It warmed my heart. I can relate to it so much as you know.

 

Blogger Sessygoba said ... (10/31/2006 11:54 AM) : 

I'm glad ur mojo is back.I miss reading these writings..

these feelings are too good to be true..& now I am depressed..lol!

Lovin the picture

 

Blogger Jewaira said ... (10/31/2006 2:35 PM) : 

Wonderful feelings Don :)

 

Blogger Chubby Femme said ... (10/31/2006 4:34 PM) : 

ME WANT PYAAAR! hehehe remember the song?

 

Blogger Hope said ... (10/31/2006 8:04 PM) : 

as soon as I read this story, I thought of this Arabic song...

http://song.6rb.com/iraq/maged/maged-byn-aydya.ram

 

Blogger Mystique said ... (11/01/2006 2:40 PM) : 

I guess your mojo is back!
I loved how the writing revealed what he & she felt.

Cheers

 

Blogger *Simply ME* said ... (11/01/2006 8:37 PM) : 

It will begin and they will fall in love the love will last but the spark and glow will fade with time. The first heart leap is what makes it "click" I believe feeling that beat makes them want to try and explore their different personalities. Remembering that leap is what will always make them stick together; you don't feel that with anyone

Must admit you are a great writer you impressed me and caught my attention go on complete the story for us


Goodluck

 

Blogger BB said ... (11/03/2006 8:45 PM) : 

*sigh* ,, damn !

 

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